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My Attempt to Walk in Linn Carter’s Shadow #

Dear Apprentice,

In the days of your, forever ago and anon, and so on and so forth, a legendary writer and editor named Linn Carter released two sword and sorcery tales, “People of the Dragon” and “Pillars of Hell”.

The idea behind these stories was that each tale would follow the next generation in a pre-historic tribe. Unfortunately, Carter never finished the tale.

Lee Patton introduced me to these stories when he was helping me polish my short fiction “Seed of the Gods” last year. Since then, I’ve decided to finish what Linn Carter did not, a series of five stories following the generational history of a pre-historic tribe.

Today, I’m going to begin work on the second story, following the son of Seed’s antagonist as he wrangles with his conflicting views of masculinity.

Check back here often, I’ll be updating the journal as I go along.

Word Counts #

First Draft Journal — January 2026 #

Week Zero #

Friday — 1/2 #

Since I’ve finished my last novel rotation early (go me!), I’m beginning some work on this small idea I’ve had for some time. Let’s dive into it.

Generation One: Consisted of the conflict between Utzi the Pathfinder, a rebellious figure and Hano the Slayer, the new chieftain and discoverer of the Great Cave, who represents the orthodox future of the people.

Utzi perished, and Dorma carried his legacy. She would have given birth to his daughter, though this would have happened outside the narrative.

Hano the Slayer has always felt undermined, he made a great discovery that saved his people in times of need. But he refuses to let go of the cave.

Generation Two: Gora Younger is Hano the Slayer’s son. Gora is hungry for glory and to take up his aging father’s mantle. The seed is corrupted and Hano has wasted his life trying to find out why, and to what extent it was cursed. As a result, the Great Cave’s people dwindles as more and more flock to Dorma Farseer’s village where once they all lived in harmony. Dorma is likely over one hundred years old, making her far older than Utzi ever was. Hano is beginning to die of old age before 50, just as Gora Elder had.

Gora courts with Eshil, whom he falls in love with, but she never fully requites. She leaves him for the surface, and in Gora’s rage, he curses her.

Years later, as Gora prepares to claim his chiefhood, a scout troupe returns telling tales of statues deeper in the cave, who all resemble people missing for years. The elders agree that Gora should descend into the cave to find the source of the treachery.

Below, a Medusa (Gorgon) dwells, which turns out to be Eshil, transformed by Gora’s curse. A conflict. Perhaps Gora let’s her live?

Generation Three: Shama is Gora’s daughter. When her brother takes the chiefhood and exiles her for her shamanic practice, she seeks Dorma’s village and finds it largely abandoned.

Something has happened—a geomancer sorcerer has taken up residence in a stone fortress and has subjegated the people. Shama must delve into a living fortress that shifts with the will of its master to save Dorma, who has learned the Great Cave will run right into hell.

Saturday — 1/3 #

Made some good progress of The Evil Eye today. I’m excited for how these stories are shaping up. After the deep intrigue and emotional empathy needed for What Lies Below, it’s refreshing to write a simple adventure with mostly external factors.

I am planning to begin the scenes where they enter a strange layer of Pandemonium, which is similar in my head to Skyrim’s Blackreach and one of Bloodbourne’s Chalice Dungeons. I picture it luminescent but firmly appearing overground at night, with sprawling landbridges to imply the underground setting and mushroom trees like Morrowind.

Week Zero Word Counts #

Week One #

Saturday — 1/10 #

Given that it is a rest week for me, I chose not to do much writing, instead focusing on leisure and YouTube/Marketing stuff. Today, I have the itch, so I’m going to try to approach it again. I have structure for the third story, and I’m definitely excited to approach it. All that’s left is finishing up this second story, which I have a clear vision for.

Sunday — 1/11 #

Going to break my convention a bit and include the following Sunday in this week. It’s just a weird time since it was a rest week. The main thing to discuss was yesterday’s session. One of those windups where I wasn’t really feeling it, but I hit my 1,000 words.

Today, I did a lot of revision and finished The Evil Eyes, which has clocked in at my longest short story to date. I’m also very proud of it.

My original version of the fight with the stone men (which I wrote yesterday) was not doing it for me. I slept on it, warmed up with revision, and finished strong with a reimagined fight scene.

I also got stuck for awhile trying to achieve my peaceful end with Eshil. There was no non-violent solution, so I decided to strike write in the middle.

This one will be shelved for a bit, since it’s now time to move on to SOIL.

Week One Word Counts #

Week Two #

Feedback Notes #

I’ve received feedback from two trusted cohorts. What was useful is they independently shared the same frustration which tells me that it needs to be fixed.

• Ending where Gora thinks to call after Eshil, but Joan stops him.
  • Fix, let Gora pursue her and attempt to start the bridge. Conflict, then Joan follows and her presence leads to Gora making the decision to letting her leave on his own.
• Ending fight needs a bit more OOMPH.
• Joan’s motivations, why is she there and what is her connection to the People of the Great Cave?

Week One Word Counts #